McCandless Project

For my project I did something different with my hair.  I usually French braid my hair or put it in a pony tail and I always wear a headband.  On Wednesday I decided to straighten my hair and I didn't wear a headband.  I got a lot of comments because usually I do the same hairstyle.  People said, they loved it, and it looked super cute!  Its kind of nice getting complements for the tiny things I change or do.  During the experiment I felt great people kept complimenting me so it made me feel good.  I was surprised at all the compliments people gave me, a lot of people wear their hair down so I thought my project was to simple but it turned out ok.  I believe that a person is free in their decisions and in what they do in life.  People shouldn't judge people about what they look like but when you do change something small be confident in what you did.

My Quote

My quote was, "For I know the plans I have for you declares the Lord, plans to prosper you and not to harm you, plans to give you a hope and a future." Jeremiah 29:11.  I chose this quote because its my favorite bible verse. This quote represents me because I'm a Christian and I know that God has a plan for my life.  This quote affects the decisions/good and bad choices I make in life. if I lived my life according to this quote I would be smart with my decisions and know god has my back in life.  This is why Jeremiah 29:11 is my favorite quote.

Short Story

 

Jessica Moore

Mrs. Belden

Honors English 1

5 October 2014

Solider

    I sit here bored out of my mind while the guidance counselor is talking about colleges and applications.  I think I don't know what the heck I'm going to do with my life.  I don't know if I'll get accepted to any of these and what if they don't think I'm good enough.  I go to my counselor after the assembly and ask how do I pick a school.  

She said, “ what kinds of thing are you interested in majoring in Charlie?  “I'm not quite sure” I replied.  “You can go to medical school, law school, or become an engineer or a teacher.”  No those all sound boring.  “What about the Military” she asks.  All of a sudden I was actually interested in what she was saying.  I took the Military into consideration and went home to talk to my parents.  They weren’t fond of the idea they wanted me to go to college because it less dangerous and I won’t go into war.  That really ticked me off, I’m going to be an adult and they won’t even support my decisions.  I stormed off to my room and shut the door behind me.  I searched all the different branches I could join and looked to see possible jobs I could do.  I immediately said no to the Air force and Navy, I hate long periods of time on boat and flying.  I shut my computer and lie in bed thinking of the Army then doze into a deep sleep.

The next morning I wake up walk downstairs and I see my mom talking on the phone with my grandpa.  She says, "I told him you were talking about joining the military and he wants to talk to you about it.  My grandpa was in the Marines and fought in war.  I answer the phone and the first thing he tells me is not to join the Marines.  He says it's dangerous and you have a high possibility of going across the country to war.  He then said I needed to talk to a recruiter because they would have a lot more important information for me.  My mom arranged a day to go talk to a recruiter.  I was very intrigued in everything the general was saying.  I could chose a job I was interested and go to training to learn how to do it.  Also I would go to basic training for 10 weeks and I would stay with a group of other men in the same unit.  After our meeting I shook his hand turned around and saw my mom walking towards the car rather quickly.  I got in the car and asked why she was such in a hurry.  She said, "I don't think this was a useful meeting, it was a waste of time."  "Then why did you arrange it" I asked.  She replied, "I wanted you to know more about the military before you make a big decision like this."  I just sit there like a statue and ignore what she just said and sit there staring out the window at the white fluffy clouds as they go bye.    

I get home and go talk to my dad in his study.   I ask him why mom doesn't want me to join the Military.  He says, “ Its not that she doesn't want you to joins its that she doesn't want to lose you like your brother.”  That really got to me, my brother passed away in a car accident 3 years ago.  My mom was devastated when it happened, she took me out of school for 2 weeks just so she wouldn't leave my side.  That night as I watch TV a commercial about the Army National Guard comes on.  After the commercial it showed a website, I quickly wrote it down.  I type in ArmyNationalGuard.Org.  I read through all the information and it says the Army National Guard is the Military but you

have a less likelihood of going overseas.  Also I could live in the state I'm currently in and wouldn't have to move away from my family.

The next morning I showed my mom the website, she was impressed with it.  She wasn't fully sold but she took it into consideration knowing I have a less likelihood of leaving and going over seas.  My mom talked with my dad about for a while and a week later she was ok with me going into the Army!   I was super excited to finally know what I was going to do with my life. A week later I went back to the recruiter and signed a million papers, it was awful.  I had to take lots of medical and physical tests to make sure I was healthy before leaving for boot camp.  Months passed and every couple weekends I would have to go train with other people joining. This week is my last week at home it was devastating for my mom, she was constantly crying. Saturday came and I was finally done with signing papers, getting medical exams and training. I leave for Oklahoma in 3 hours for boot camp for 10 weeks. It was kind of scary thinking about but I knew I would be ok.  I get my ticket and then head to bag check with my parents next to me.  All of a sudden I hear “flight to Oklahoma leaving in 15 minutes”, My mom starts bawling. I give them hugs and kisses then head for the plane. I take my seat and stare out the window thinking this is really happening I'm finally on my own.  I see my parents in the window waving goodbye then all of a sudden they are getting smaller and I know I'm leaving.  All I can think is when will I be home.

1) The thing I specifically changed from my first draft to my last draft was fixing all the text evidence to make it MLA format.
2) Sharing my essay with an adult helped me the most because my mom talked me through my mistakes in order to make improvements.  This was the most helpful because I was one on one with my mom so I was able to focus better and see what I did wrong.
3) Something that will help me improve on my writing this year is checklists for what u should have in your paper.  This helps me a lot because it helps my paper be organized and I know if I'm missing anything.
4) A goal I want to achieve this year is adding more supporting evidence to my papers. 

Timed Writing

           I read the book Wonder by R.J. Palacio.  The theme of this book is don't judge a person because they are different.  The author shwa this theme when Julian tries to turn everyone against Jack and when kids ask Summer why she hangs out with August.

           The first detail the author uses to show the theme is when Julian tries to turn everyone against Jack.  Julian gets most of the fifth graders at school not to be friends with Jack because he is friends with August.  Julian is having a party and most of the fifth graders are invited, and there he tells everyone that being friends with August is bringing Jack down and that he is losing his real friends.  Jack thinks this is dumb and continues to be friends with August.  This supports the theme because even when his old friend Julian continues to judge August, Jack knows he is a good friend.  Jack would rather be friends with August rather than Julian.

The second detail that supports the theme is when kids ask Summer why she hangs out with August.  Ximena Chin says Summer is a saint for hanging out with August.  Summer replies “Its not a big deal.”  then charlotte asks if Mr. Tushman, the principal, is making her be friends with August.  Summer answers, “NO im friends with him because I want to be friends with him” (Palacio 119).  Summer knows he is the weirdest looking kids she has ever seen, but he is just a kids.  This supports the theme because even when kids questioned why why Summer is friends with him, she tells them it doesn't matter what he looks like he is just a kid.

           The theme of Wonder is don't judge a person because they are different.  Throughout the book most of the kids are scared of August and don't get to know him because they think he is a freak.  However, Summer and Jack get to know him and like him for who he is and stays friends with him even when others question their friendship.  The book Wonder teaches a great life lesson to everyone about not judging people and sticking with your friends no matter what.