1) The thing I specifically changed from my first draft to my last draft was fixing all the text evidence to make it MLA format.
2) Sharing my essay with an adult helped me the most because my mom talked me through my mistakes in order to make improvements. This was the most helpful because I was one on one with my mom so I was able to focus better and see what I did wrong.
3) Something that will help me improve on my writing this year is checklists for what u should have in your paper. This helps me a lot because it helps my paper be organized and I know if I'm missing anything.
4) A goal I want to achieve this year is adding more supporting evidence to my papers.
I'm happy to hear that your mom was such a help. I always shared my writing with my dad because he was just a huge help. Your goal is both practical and unique. I love it! :)
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